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#91 Konig Des Todes

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Posted 11 October 2011 - 05:56 PM

@Bubbles (the deep sea dragon): Thanks. If Anet were to ever requisition me to write a fourth GW novel, I'd be ecstatic. :D Heck, just working for Anet in any means is (imagine how I was when I first joined the Test Krewe :p). Be it testing, designing, or writing for Anet, I'd love to.

Or if Anet just got inspired by my stories and took aspects of them for canon... <3 Just <3

@Skorm: Hah, I was playing around with what I said. I wouldn't really say a single arrow aimed at a god is much of a cliff hanger, to me it's more of showing that the battle's on-going. But yes, cliffhangers do what they're meant to do. Make you addicted and coming back for more. :devil:

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#92 Bubbles The Prophet

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Posted 11 October 2011 - 07:39 PM

The next stories are about Bubbles, the one who deared to define the gods...:D

#93 Konig Des Todes

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Posted 11 October 2011 - 07:50 PM

Define eh? So then what's the definition of the gods? :p

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#94 Konig Des Todes

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Posted 13 October 2011 - 06:07 PM

Shesh, impatient people are impatient, barely letting me get out of my class before complaining that 34 isn't up yet...


Writer's Note: I had a lot of trouble figure out what to write for that last line... nothing really sounds good to me. :/

Edited by Konig Des Todes, 03 February 2012 - 11:56 PM.

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#95 Lord Skorm

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Posted 13 October 2011 - 09:56 PM

from 33
"Balthazar fell to a knee in pain. Abaddon turned, shock on his no longer hidden face. His mask that he always wore fell onto the ground during his fight."

34
"Abaddon narrowed his eyes at the sight before him. He dropped his sword and reached to take off his mask. Behind the mask, a nightmarish visage laid. His wings twitched in anticipation as he readied himself for the attack the three were making. The mask fell to the ground.
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Abaddon and his silly habit of wearing 2 masks

#96 Thalador

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Posted 13 October 2011 - 09:58 PM

He put it back after pwning Balthazar & Melandru. ^^

His face was turning twisted, so he wanted to hide it.

#97 Konig Des Todes

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Posted 13 October 2011 - 10:04 PM

Thalador is correct that he picked his mask up after beating Balth and Melandru down, after all behind his mask is "a nightmarish visage" (chp 34) that "normally left  mortals going insane" (chp 22). He wouldn't want his servants go insane, would he?

Gonna make a minor edit to 34 to make that clear.

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#98 Lord Skorm

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Posted 14 October 2011 - 05:09 PM

Damn, guess I missed it.

#99 Konig Des Todes

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Posted 20 October 2011 - 03:34 AM

Sense it's an hour and a half away from Thursday, and I have a test tomorrow (so brain=wiped), I'll just post chp 36 early so I don't forget.


Fall of Gods is now complete. Took longer than I hoped; there will be a sequel to this called Primeval Darkness. It's currently being written but idk when I'll start posting it (I don't want unexpected long breaks like with this work).

Edited by Konig Des Todes, 03 February 2012 - 11:55 PM.

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Posted 20 October 2011 - 04:49 PM

Congratz on completing Fall of the Gods!    It's impressive to see all the work you put into it.

Edited by Doctor Overlord, 20 October 2011 - 04:57 PM.


#101 Akembo Mehtani

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Posted 23 October 2011 - 12:49 AM

What Overlord said. The ending's great, but poor Lyssa.

I'm pumped to see Primeval Darkness whenever you post it.

#102 Konig Des Todes

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Posted 27 January 2012 - 11:28 AM

Thread Necro!

See first two posts for why.

See you next week. (P.S. I figured that since Primeval Darkness is a sequel to Fall of Gods, I might as well keep them in the same thread. Mods, feel free to rename this thread "Konig's Fan Fiction")

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#103 The Holy Dragons

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Posted 27 January 2012 - 07:35 PM

awesome! can't wait ^^

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Posted 28 January 2012 - 01:56 AM

You're putting in artwork for the chapters?   What a terrific idea!   It could be like a cross between a comic and a machinima!

#105 Konig Des Todes

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Posted 28 January 2012 - 06:16 AM

While I do want to have an artwork at least per act (per chapter is better but...), for now I only have one per story (think of it as a book cover).

Though now I'm tempted to draw out a scene for Act I just to see if my art talent can handle it. I guess I'll try this week.

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Posted 30 January 2012 - 06:25 AM

Konig Des Todes said:

While I do want to have an artwork at least per act (per chapter is better but...), for now I only have one per story (think of it as a book cover).

Though now I'm tempted to draw out a scene for Act I just to see if my art talent can handle it. I guess I'll try this week.
Oo!  I want to see that!

#107 Konig Des Todes

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Posted 04 February 2012 - 12:03 AM

OP updated with chapter 1 of Primeval Darkness.

In other news, I've become tempted to write up an additional act to Fall of Gods that takes place between Act 2 and 3 (which means no Konig since he's imprisoned), mainly because how I wrote out Desmina (and Konig's family) after Herzog's death felt very lacking. Maybe I will do that after I finish Primeval Darkness.

Edited by Konig Des Todes, 04 February 2012 - 01:40 PM.

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#108 Thalador

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Posted 04 February 2012 - 01:58 PM

Great thing you've started publishing it! Being an editor-in-chief, I've got the privilege, responsibility, and curse (knowing stuff in advance is not that cool :() of knowing what will happen in the story; however, it's always fun to read your chapters again. :)

Btw, you've really fired me up to begin publishing my own fiction. I just don't know when is the correct time to do that with all this beta events madness that would divert the attention of potential readers. :(

Konig Des Todes said:

In other news, I've become tempted to write up an additional act to Fall of Gods that takes place between Act 2 and 3 (which means no Konig since he's imprisoned), mainly because how I wrote out Desmina (and Konig's family) after Herzog's death felt very lacking. Maybe I will do that after I finish Primeval Darkness.

I'd like to read that. It was all too sudden when the Rofocale guy just burped that out to Konig.

I think it's a good idea and it would bridge those long, intervening years very nicely. Plus, it must be intriguing, given we don't really know much about those events. For examle, in Desmina's case we've just simply learned of the fact that someone had burned down the temple and she had died saving her students.

Edited by Thalador, 04 February 2012 - 04:17 PM.


#109 Hookstar

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Posted 18 February 2012 - 03:55 AM

Vastly enjoying your work, Subscribed.

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Posted 26 February 2012 - 01:37 PM

i dont like Talandrin....

#111 Konig Des Todes

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Posted 09 March 2012 - 08:42 PM

I am sorry to say that because of mid-terms this week I was unable to finish the next chapter in time. So I'll be skipping a week.

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Posted 12 April 2012 - 11:50 AM

Next please!

#113 Lord Skorm

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Posted 12 April 2012 - 12:21 PM

Is this still going?

#114 Konig Des Todes

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Posted 12 April 2012 - 08:34 PM

Lord Skorm said:

Is this still going?
Due to various variables I was forced to take a 3 week break from this, but when I returned to writing I ended up detesting where I was and where I was going. I also got a few ideas on how to (in my view) improve the earlier chapters which I far prefer.

So I'm rewriting, and I want to get a good chunk done before doing any more updates. I was hoping to have a "good chunk" done by tomorrow, but it's not the case at this rate (maybe next week).

Distractions, distractions, distractions.

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 08:15 PM

Hello!  Just wanted to pop in and say that I just started reading "Fall of Gods".  I like where the first chapter is going and how fast the events are developing.




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